writing conference meeting

   Yesterday noon,I had writing conference meeting with my RW teacher. I asked some questions about how to write a good essay and how to improve my writing ability. When I write an essay I always make a mistakes with the thesis statement, main ideas and some details should be related with the main ideas.

    Teacher helps me to modify my first draft essay's errors.She told me thesis needs to include all 3 body paragraphs main ideas in 1 sentences. Each paragraphs has 1 main idea and this idea is clearly written in the first sentence of each body paragraph.For body paragraph should add more details and examples to body paragraphs.Moreover, teacher also teach me how to write the essay's conclusion.Essay's conclusion needs a sentence about your 3 main ideas and also to change some words before I write.

    Through teacher told some good advises for me to improve my writing ability. I hope I can write a good essay at the 2nd draft.It is can better then before.